Is my logo Ok?

[Mineralesque]

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[Carriegsxr6]

very cute, i love the font. do you want to add any color in it?

[chopsgirl]

too cute, my only concern is that it's a little hard to read

[Mineralesque]

I was wondering if I need to add something else. I just don't know what. I used to have this[ATTACH]11323[/ATTACH]

[Crafty1]

i like it, but like chopgirl said it is a little hard to read.

[Mineralesque]

Is it the Candles by Linette that is hard to read?

Thank you.

[debscent]

I think if you didn't bold the "and a few other things" it might be easier to read. I keep wanting the "By" to be a lower case. Candles by Linette.

[Mineralesque]

Okay....I will try that.

[Mineralesque]

The one I have in my avery program does have the "and a few other things" lower case. I had this other one in the paint program because I couldn't attach the avery one.

I would be happy to send it to somebody if you want to see it.

[Mineralesque]

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Is this better?

[grama]

I like the redo - I like the simplicity of it That's my style:)

[Mineralesque]

Thank you. Simplicity is so much better for me. I like pictures on the labels but then I get tired of them.

Thank you for the suggestions.

[Late Night]

I like the re-do too. Much easier to read.

[mrchips]

Personally, I'd split the wording differenty, "Candles" - "by Linette". This would also fit better in the curved top of your round label.

For your square label, maybe "Candles" - "and a few other things!" - "by Linette". Scans a bit better, but that's just my preference.

Nice simple label though. Easy enough to read, and it tells me exactly what's in the jar!

Mr Chips

[Mineralesque]

Thank you.

I wil play around and see how it looks with mrchips suggestions.

[debscent]

I like simplicity too. Looks good to me!

[chopsgirl]

I really like the revised version. it's easier to read and more professional looking

[Mineralesque]

Thank you. I made a label for my aluminum bottles and it looks really nice.

[showoffs]

For me it is a little hard to read.

Shannon

[Mineralesque]

Can you tell me exactly what is hard to read? Do I just need to just find a better font? I was planning to use these on clear label not white.

Thank you

[CareBear]

Script fonts are always a bit of a challenge for me. But I like the redesign better than the original.

[Mineralesque]

Thank you Carebear. I thought that it looked pretty good. Some other person wanted to charge me $20 an hour to design a logo for me. I would love a more professional one but I can't afford it.